Essay Rough draft & Peer edit

  • You should have completed your rough draft now
  • Rough draft: you can double space on paper, or type, d
  • Peer edit: please read through the rules of academic English below before beginning peer edit.
  • I want you to find 5-10 words that could be ‘upgraded’ or changed to something more specific.  Choose an active verb over a passive verb.
  • Once complete, find a partner to exchange essays with.  Use thispeer edit sheet
  • Look for the use of first person (I think, I am going to tell you), contractions (avoid), is the title identified by ” or Underlined, or italics.
  • Is the thesis clear and supported by each topic sentence?
  • For any grade 10s registered, please check out this link:
  • https://curriculum.gov.bc.ca/assessment/literacy-assessment/grade-10-literacy-assessment​
  • as you will be writing the literacy assessment next week.