HalloThis is an embedded Microsoft Office document, powered by Office Online. I think two things I did well in this essay is my introduction and my hook. My introduction introduced both stories briefly and my hook made the essay interesting to read from the beginning. Two things I could improve on is my organization and […]
Category: English 10
To Kill A Mockingbird-Reading Journals
This book was amazing to read. It was full of ups and downs and it was written beautifully in the eyes of Scout who’s looking back to her childhood as an adult. I recommend this book to everyone because it is a classic and it could seem tiring at first but it gets more interesting […]
The Story Of Us-Creative Writing Project
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A Letter To My Little Sister-Spoken Word
Here is my video: Here is the text: Overall I really enjoyed writing and performing my spoken word. I think two things I did well on was maintaining my tones that I had chosen and also the writing of the spoken. It was written from the heart, then edited a little bit to make it […]
Breaking the Rule-Narrative Essay-Corrections
This is an embedded Microsoft Office document, powered by Office Online. I think overall the essay I wrote was structurally well written. Two things I did well on were my Rule of 3’s Parallelism and also I kept my essay interesting, making the reader enjoy and smile at what they were reading. Two things […]
Dystopian Poem-Corrections
My Perfect Life I woke up to the sound of my alarm clock’s beep, Oh, how happy I am to have another day to live I love how I always get just the right amount of sleep, My older brother likes to complain but I haven’t seen him in a week “Get up […]
The Human Condition Paragraph
In the This is Our World video, Steve Cutts is trying to illustrate how our life is affected these day because of all the technology we have around and the addiction to that technology. It starts off showing humans on their cellphones falling down a sewer. A little boy sitting down on the side of […]
10 Word Story
He was her happiness, she was his pleasure. He lied.