The Hope Affected by Isolation and Injustice- Synthesis Essay Correction

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I think two things I did well in this essay is my introduction and my hook. My introduction introduced both stories briefly and my hook made the essay interesting to read from the beginning.

Two things I could improve on is my organization and also checking to see if my quotes are inserted properly.


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