Breaking the Rule-Narrative Essay-Corrections


I think overall the essay I wrote was structurally well written. Two things I did well on were my Rule of 3’s Parallelism and also I kept my essay interesting, making the reader enjoy and smile at what they were reading. Two things I need to work on is cutting the deadwood in my essay and improving on my run on sentences or comma splices.


One thought on “Breaking the Rule-Narrative Essay-Corrections

Leave a Reply

Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *