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Here is the edited version of my narrative essay. I have corrected all my mistakes.

Two things I did well,

1. I really worked hard to use poetic devices
2. My essay has originally 1700 words, and I shrunk it down to 980 words.

Two things I can improve

1. I didn’t manage to include every aspect of my story into the essay
2. I messed up on some of my punctuation and spelling.