Things I think I did good on this essay was find a common theme between my sources and my thesis.
Things I need to work on is finding better ways to connect the sources as well as my word choice.
2 things I am proud of is my use of quotes in this essay, and the arguments I used in it.
2 things I need to work on still is my thesis and concluding the essay.
2 things I will work on for my next essay is variation of word choice. As well as previewing my evidence.
2 things I am proud of for this essay, is my use of quotes and my ability to get it done in the short time period.
Sentence :On a Friday night in summer my brother invited me to a Subaru meet in Burnaby.
Phrase: I kept driving.
Words: Summer, Subaru, Driving.
I chose the words because both driving and Subaru’s are a pretty big part of my identity and summer is when I got my Subaru.
The importance of this words tell me how I can use them in a poem to give the poem a deeper meaning.
From this exercise I can learn how to use an object as inspiration for a poem or a story.
In my Subaru
Driving in summer