Category: English 11

Narrative Essay

 

Two things I did well:

1. Sensory detail and descriptivity

2. Creating a story that accurately represents everything I wanted it to

 

Two things I can improve on:

1. Quote intergration

2. Reading over carefully to catch little mistakes

Opinion Piece

 

 

Sticks and Stones
Contrary to popular nursery rhymes and sayings, words leave marks as deep and painful as sticks and stones. A word with no more than one syllable can silence a room and exasperate a culture using less than a breathe. If these words cause so much harm then why would we use them? Teams such as The Cleveland Indians, Chicago Blackhawks, Washington Redskins, and Edmonton Eskimos are all examples of taking words commonly used to appropriate a culture, and turning them into entertainment. Words such as Redskin stem all the way back to 1769; not only was it used as a derogatory term, it was used to describe the torturous scalping and skinning opposed onto the First Nation. Today the word is used to describe a football team which has won three Super Bowls; this team is depicted by a drawing of an Indian chief wearing a head dress with feathers, and cheerleaders who wear long black braids. Not only is the word connected to a dark past, they are portraying the Native Americans stereotypically. Many Aboriginals, including, Susan Harjo have filed a petition against the Patent and Trademark Office asking for the revocation of the team’s six federal trademark registrations, because of the disparagement upon the community. However, with the many people petitioning the court no change was made until 2014. With this being said, studies show that seventy-three percent of Native Americans were not bothered with the word, “redskins,” and only twenty-six percent were bothered by the use of Native American imagery in sports. Furthermore, the aboriginals have no doubt been through hardship, but it is not over for them; the issue of sports teams seems rudimentary to the trouble which faces their reserves. Most people wouldn’t think about the burdens they face; in their minds Natives live off the land with buffalo skins and spears. These perceptions, these stereotypes, drive from the medias notion of their culture. They see The Cleveland Indians, Chicago Blackhawks, Washington Redskins, and Edmonton Eskimos versions plastered on their uniforms, merchandise, and billboards, but they don’t see the truth. They don’t see who chief Blackhawk really was, and what war he fought in. They don’t know that Eskimos are really known as Inuits and that just because they don’t look like Pocahontas doesn’t mean they’re not indigenous. As Winona Linn once said in a spoken word: “ He could only call me out because of the colour of my skin but my skin doesn’t match his perception of Indian,” ( Linn, 2013) because they only see the transparent mask put upon their culture. If you were to replace the derogatory terms or crude cartoons with any other culture, light would shine upon the immorality. Light would shine on the sticks and stones.

 

Shapira , Ian. “A brief history of the word ‘redskin’ and how it became a source of controversy.” The Washington Post, WP Company, 19 May 2016, www.washingtonpost.com/local/a-brief-history-of-the-word-redskin-and-how-it-became-a-source-of-controversy/2016/05/19/062cd618-187f-11e6-9e16-2e5a123aac62_story.html?utm_term=.29f3f591d492.

“Poll: Native Americans’ attitudes toward the Washington Redskins team name.” The Washington Post, WP Company, 19 May 2016, www.washingtonpost.com/apps/g/page/mobile/sports/poll-native-americans-attitudes-toward-the-washington-redskins-team-name/2034/.

PoetrySlamVancouver, and Winona Linn. “ Knock-Off Native.” YouTube, YouTube, 30 Jan. 2013, www.youtube.com/watch?v=i_zFOsd_pqA.

 

“Dead Poets Society” Reflection and Connection

 

The meanjng of this movie is heavily based around “carte diem”, meaning to seize the day. Mr. Keating teaches the boys a valuable lesson about how short life is and in that little bit of time you have to make it worth it. He taught them that you do not have to conform to your teachers and parents; you are your own individual that can make your own choices and take your own paths, even if it’s the “less travelled one”. This move connects to Macbeth soliloquy tomorrow, as they both connect to the meaning of life. Keatings meanjng is much more hopeful and motivational, rather than, Macbeth who has a more dreary look on life. He believes that life is pointless. It too may be short but the time spent alive has no impact and is meaningless. He doesn’t believe that there is any point to “seizing” the day.

I think this movie was really good. It had a very important message that could still be connected today. Many people try to conform into society and that still leads people to take their lives, much like Niel. The movie was very engaging and I never once looked away. I would definitely watch this again and would for sure take the meaning of this movie with me.

Persuasive Essay Corrections

Two things to improve on:

1. Writing clear thesis statements that effectively prove my point

2. My grammar

Two things I did well:

1. Having a unique writing style/ voice

2. The hook and conclusion

Lord Of Flies Essay

What it means to be human…

Humans need to be able to communicate

Humans need to interact with others

Humans look for happiness

Humans want to express their feelings

Humans like to help others in need

Humans like to communicate in order to share and gain knowledge

Humans need others to support

Humans are violent and mean and even greedy

Humans hurt other populations because humans are discriminatory

Humans are vengeful

Humans are sympathetic and are able to share and help others

Humans are oblivious when it is not happening to us

Humans can be united by the simplist of things

Humans can find joy

The first novel in the series The Uglies is one of my favourite novels because it showed me the affects of beauty standards and how the fixation of being “Barbie doll” perfect can take over our lives and control our every move. This series is set in the future and follows a young girl Tally. In this distopia beauty is everything and before the age of 16 you are considered ugly. Once you turn 16 you get a surgery that turns your features porcelain perfect. When Tallys friend runs away escaping the surgery she must find her in order to become “pretty”. In this adventure Tally finds the truth behind the surgery and realizes that being “pretty” is not all that it’s been worked up to be. This book taught me that looks may seem like they key to the happiness but in the end you control your destiny and your happiness.