Things I did good on
- I think I did well on trying to incorporate the 5 senses into my writing.
- I thought harder into writing this time so after I think I do understand and appreciate myself a bit more than before.
Things I will improve for next time
- Parallelism is something I can work on next time to make a more fluent narrative.
- I had a hard time finding something to write about that was meaningful to me and next time I’ll be able to establish what I want to write about sooner to dedicate more time into the actual writing.