4 Comments on Looking Out the Window – Writing Composition

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   mikylan2019

   February 3, 2020 at 7:34 pm (5 years ago)

   I really enjoyed reading this! I thought you phrased things really well, using lots of detailed and descriptive words. It really took me to Mexico along with you and it seemed like I could hear, see, and feel everything you could. I liked how you ended things with a question, because it really let you think, and it didn’t feel like it just ended and that’s that. Thank you for the journey!

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     annabelles2019

     February 12, 2020 at 2:08 am (5 years ago)

     I really appreciate your comment. Thank you!

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   Kathy Shong

   February 12, 2020 at 1:32 am (5 years ago)

   Good work Annabelle – well written with a twist at the end!

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     annabelles2019

     February 12, 2020 at 2:07 am (5 years ago)

     Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the part at the end. I wanted to make sure the reader thought for a minute and really reflected on themselves.

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