03Feb2020 Looking Out the Window – Writing Composition categories: English 9 Loading... Taking too long? Reload document | Open in new tab Download 4 Comments on Looking Out the Window – Writing Composition mikylan2019 February 3, 2020 at 7:34 pm (2 years ago) I really enjoyed reading this! I thought you phrased things really well, using lots of detailed and descriptive words. It really took me to Mexico along with you and it seemed like I could hear, see, and feel everything you could. I liked how you ended things with a question, because it really let you think, and it didn’t feel like it just ended and that’s that. Thank you for the journey! Reply annabelles2019 February 12, 2020 at 2:08 am (2 years ago) I really appreciate your comment. Thank you! Reply Kathy Shong February 12, 2020 at 1:32 am (2 years ago) Good work Annabelle – well written with a twist at the end! Reply annabelles2019 February 12, 2020 at 2:07 am (2 years ago) Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the part at the end. I wanted to make sure the reader thought for a minute and really reflected on themselves. Reply Leave a reply to Kathy Shong Cancel reply Save my name, email, and website in this browser for the next time I comment.