Essay corrections – English 11 – Block D – Luka Mladenovic

Essay corrections

Good

I think I did very well at choosing 2 sources I was confident in information wise.  I had watched and studied them multiple times before doing the essay.

Not so good

Try to start earlier so I do more information and I’m not on a tight deadline where I am forcing my ideas instead of taking time to think about them.

Not so good 2

Try to actually press the send button on my E-mail so I don’t get a 5% reduction.

https://www.newyorker.com/culture/cultural-comment/hasan-minhajs-new-brown-america

https://www.thestar.com/entertainment/television/2016/10/09/kims-convenience-mines-korean-grocery-store-for-laughs.html

 

Totem question – English 11 – Block D – Luka Mladenovic

Totem question

The fact they took their land and then proceeded to kill a lot of them while trying to destroy their culture is completely immoral. The F.N people today still show effects of trauma and those effects are the result of the behavior by the Canadian government and racist people. Some examples of these effects are drinking habits, depression, high rates of suicide, etc. Canadians need to realize the past and make a conscious effort to help fix what some bad people have started.

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