Essay corrections – English 11 – Block D – Luka Mladenovic

Essay corrections


I think I did very well at choosing 2 sources I was confident in information wise.  I had watched and studied them multiple times before doing the essay.

Not so good

Try to start earlier so I do more information and I’m not on a tight deadline where I am forcing my ideas instead of taking time to think about them.

Not so good 2

Try to actually press the send button on my E-mail so I don’t get a 5% reduction.


Totem question – English 11 – Block D – Luka Mladenovic

Totem question

The fact they took their land and then proceeded to kill a lot of them while trying to destroy their culture is completely immoral. The F.N people today still show effects of trauma and those effects are the result of the behavior by the Canadian government and racist people. Some examples of these effects are drinking habits, depression, high rates of suicide, etc. Canadians need to realize the past and make a conscious effort to help fix what some bad people have started.

Persuasive essay corrections – English 11 – Block D – Luka Mladenovic


I could have improved on…

  1. Going deeper and providing much more argument. It was there, but it wasn’t enough.
  2. Providing more research – using more evidence and sources helps my ideas to be more convincing and more trusted by others who would potentially oppose it in the first place.

I did well on…

  1. Keeping it structured – I stuck with the system and it ended up being an essay that was fairly easy to read. All the parts were identifiable by the reader.

The photo included below is Simon from the book “The Lord of the flies” and in my eyes, he represents the one who leads with love in the book.

Here is the document with the grammar mistakes corrected.

What Darwin Never Knew Question – Biology 11 – Luka Mladenovic

How did the discovery of DNA prove that Darwin’s theory of evolution was correct and how does it change the way we view evolution today and into the future?

The DNA proved that Darwin’s theory was correct because Darwin knew THAT the process of selection was happening, but didn’t know how. Once scientists tested human DNA and compared it to other species, they found that almost all the strands were the same, except for a few. Those few strands that differed were the mutations that lead to the expansion of the brain, walking on only 2 legs, etc. Now that we have DNA proof, the idea is much more widely accepted and can only make us wonder what kind of new species might form from other current animals in our lifetime and further on in the future.

6 kingdoms organisms assignment – Luka Mladenovic

  1. Archaebacteria
    1. Crenarchaeota 
    2. Euryarchaeota

These 2 are unique because, in Archaebacteria,  The microbes are prokaryotes, meaning they have no cell nucleus. Archaeal cells have unique properties separating them from the other two, Bacteria and Eukarya.

  1. Eubacteria
    1. Blue green bacteria
    2. Spirochaetae

These organisms are unique because Eubacteria/bacteria are prokaryotes. Prokaryotes are organisms that lack a nucleus and other cell parts and are less complex organisms. Eubacteria/bacteria also possess cell walls made of peptidoglycan, a chemical that gives their cell wall added strength.

  1. Protists
    1. Marimo
    2. Forams

These organisms are unique because protists are eukaryotes, which means their cells have a nucleus and other membrane-bound organelles. Most, but not all, protists are single-celled.

  1. Fungi
    1. Sac fungi
    2. Basidiomycetes

These organisms are unique because of a chitin in their cell walls. Similar to animals, fungi are heterotrophs; they acquire their food by absorbing dissolved molecules, typically by secreting digestive enzymes into their environment.

  1. Animalia
    1. Box jellyfish
    2. Medusozoa (Jellyfish)

These organisms are unique because they are heterotrophic, which means they have to get their own food. Plants are autotrophic because they make their own food through photosynthesis. Because they cannot make their own food, members of the Animalia Kingdom must ingest, or eat, other organisms.

  1. Plantae
    1. Flowering plant
    2. Conifers

These organisms are unique because plants make their own food through a process called photosynthesis where the plant takes carbon dioxide gas, water, and light and transforms these three ingredients into sugar and oxygen. … Most plants are multicellular, meaning they are made up of more than one cell.


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