English 12
Synthesis Essay Corrections
Things I think I did good on this essay was find a common theme between my sources and my thesis.
Things I need to work on is finding better ways to connect the sources as well as my word choice.
Expository 2 Essay Corrections
2 things I am proud of is my use of quotes in this essay, and the arguments I used in it.
2 things I need to work on still is my thesis and concluding the essay.
Expository Essay Corrections
2 things I will work on for my next essay is variation of word choice. As well as previewing my evidence.
2 things I am proud of for this essay, is my use of quotes and my ability to get it done in the short time period.
English 12 Narrative Corrections
Fractured Poetry BkC
2.
Sentence :On a Friday night in summer my brother invited me to a Subaru meet in Burnaby.
Phrase: I kept driving.
Words: Summer, Subaru, Driving.
I chose the words because both driving and Subaru’s are a pretty big part of my identity and summer is when I got my Subaru.
The importance of this words tell me how I can use them in a poem to give the poem a deeper meaning.
From this exercise I can learn how to use an object as inspiration for a poem or a story.
3. Poem:
Vroom
In my Subaru
Vroom Vroom
Driving in summer
Vroom