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Open in new tab I think I did a good job since last paragraph, I have a more fluent writing and better vocabulary, I rarely repeat the same words and I think is a piece of evidence that I’m improving my writing.
I consider a good point to include my personal experience of my soccer team, because it helps to support my opinion.
I guess I have to improve my presentation, because some parts have different fountains and makes hard to read it
I need to make better the way to include sources, I had some mistakes with the capital letters ors with the format that have to be changed.