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Open in new tab For this essay I did a good research resulting in good sources which provide information that support my evidences. In my opinion the best resource is the 3rd one from “the Washington Post” which reflects the importance of ignorance in society, and how it can be a crucial factor at the time of making decisions. The example that they use, is the roll of ignorance, in the election of Donald Trump as president supporting that one of the main reasons why Trump is president is due to a high amount of ignorant voters.
I consider that my thesis statement is a very strong point of my work, because it contains the main basic arguments which support my point of view. In few words, communicates the very basic ideas of my essay.
I need to improve my formal writing, because the way I wrote my essay is very similar to the common speaking, what supposes less authority for my arguments, making harder to convince people about my perspective.
Fluent writing must be improved, because in some points of the essay it become tough to keep reading, what reduces the engagement making ineffective my message. I need a more dynamic writing that makes reader to be interested in what I share.