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I enjoyed writing this essay, learning how to write a proper essay and breaking down the different parts will help me in the future in this class and English classes I take in the future. I am proud of this essay because I chose to do something original by comparing the temptation and struggles through the allusions so it was very in depth. I felt I did well at imbedding quotes to help out my essay and the understanding for the readers. I made corrections for connecting sentences and punctuation, it will be a goal going forward for me to have less mistakes and better flow.