Convergence
I push, you pull
from start till finish
putting in the work
Yet you take the credit
I am calm and free spirited
You are brainy and stern
My love lies on weekends
where I can be myself
You are stuck on weekdays
forbidding your flaws to fly free
My effort may slack
but I know how to fix that
I am noticed but not seen
Using your skills to create mine
But you laugh from above knowing we’ll never be confined
from push to pull, we need each other
I am clueless without your clues,
you help me find my way
As a team we learn, struggle and strengthen
As a tree will not grow without its roots,
for it will never be lengthened
So no rush
take your time
your rings will slowly grow
one year at a time
the bark on our skin is rough and rigid
Like Yin and Yang
Slowly finding our
from weekend to weekday
we can stay, steadily
when we’re old and grey
as long as we don’t separate
The poem “Convergence” written by Angelina Johnston touches upon the importance of a balance life . Her poem addresses the human condition, by acknowledging acts of individuals, and how one can influence another. She also mentions the importance of reliability on other people. Throughout Johnston’s poem, she was able to answer the inquiry question, “How does the influence of others impact our own lives?”Although the answer to the question is not clearly stated, it is clear the answer is shown throughout. Johnston uses clever metaphors to enforce the imagery in one’s mind. She also acknowledges the importance of the Yin Yang balance, creating a clever allusion in her poem. Johnston managed to write a compelling poem, thematically stating the importance of balance. She did well on her poem, and created a beautiful video. It is obvious she put in a lot of effort to create such an intriguing poem and video. I love the poem Convergence because, it can be related back to the film Dead Poet’s Society. I enjoy having the opportunity to make connections as I read. Over all, Johnston’s poem was a pleasure to read. I highly recommend this composition!
Angie – a great poem… very interesting theme to explore… clever devices and great editing on the video. But I am not able to recognize the allusions you used.