I really like all the details that you used in the background of each frame. The details also helped to explain the setting and the story. Also they made it easier to understand the what was happening.
The flow of ideas in this graphic novel flow really well and make it easier to understand what the real story is about but without reading the actual story. It also makes it easier to read.
I liked your choice of words. It helped me understand exactly what was happening, so that when it switched to the next panel, I wasn’t confused.
I really like all the details that you used in the background of each frame. The details also helped to explain the setting and the story. Also they made it easier to understand the what was happening.
The flow of ideas in this graphic novel flow really well and make it easier to understand what the real story is about but without reading the actual story. It also makes it easier to read.
I liked how the characters really interacted, and how they showed expressions that fit the story really well, because it makes it less confusing.