My personal poem

The Tree

Look, that is a tree.

That is a tree in the spring.

It is a teenager standing in the wind,

It is wrapped by sunshine

and wearing up the green.

Look, that is a tree.

That is a tree in the summer.

It is a man talking with heat,

He is angry and he is strong,

he is tall and makes a lot shadow.

Look, that is a tree.

That is a tree in the fall.

It is an elder with the gold.

The setting sun was shining him,

The yellow leaves were around him.

Look, that is a tree.

That is a tree in winter.

It just like a charring match stick in the ground,

It is helpless, it is alone.

It is nothing except snow.

Look, that is a tree; Look, that is a tree.

 

Analysis

     Type: concrete

     Motivation: I saw a tree was stand front of my house.

     Theme: A tree’s appearance in each seasons.

     Rhyme scheme: I tried it, but failed.

     Poetic devices: “It is a teenager standing in the wind”, it is personification and metaphor

                                 “It is wrapped by sunshine and wearing up the green,” it is personification

                                 “It just like a charring match stick in the ground,” it is simile.

     Important things: The tree has different appearance in difference season. The difference of tree’ s appearance are

                                       show people’s life, from young to old.