“Tell Tale Heart”- alternate ending in new point of view

 

The point if view I used is Limited  Omniscient.

It’s probably just another crazy paranoid lady. At least Doug gets paid for this. Doug told his men to go to the house where the neighbours concern was. As soon as his foot stepped onto the property an awful feeling filled inside of him. He knew something was wrong but he didn’t show it, he wanted to be brave for his coworkers. Ding Dong! The gentle man came to the door. Nothing suspicious about that. He told the kind man what was happening and he kindly invited us in. In the back of Doug’s mind he knew this man wasn’t normal. Why was he still awake at such a late hour? Why would he want us to hang out in his masters bedroom? Something wasn’t right but, he had to follow Prodo call and not ask these questions. Out of nowhere the kind man isn’t so kind anymore, he starts sweating profusely, the vein in his forehead starts throbbing, and craziness fills his eyes. Doug looks at his men and nod so they know to be ready. The crazy man flips up the floorboards and reveals the dead body. Doug leaps towards him and arrests him. His men stay behind and call for backup. Doug takes the crazy man and pushes him into his cop car and off they go to the police station. Doug’s job here is done.