Narritive essay final In my essay I think I had a good lesson learned but I should have mentioned how I learned my lesson more throughout the story. As well I think my essay had a good variety of sentences however I need to improve showing rather than telling in my writing.
In my persuasive essay, I am proud of my conclusion. I think I finished my essay strong by brining back my main points in previous paragraphs. As well I think I did a good job on my final sentence in the conclusion when I ended with a question that is also a metaphor. A second […]
What reasons does Beatty give for the current state of society and for books being destroyed? In the novel Fahrenheit 451, Montag realizes he no longer takes pleasure in his job while Beatty explains to him the importance/reason for burning books and why it is the right thing to do. Mr. Beatty […]
“Are writers and artists as important to society as scientists and engineers?” Art gives people purpose and a large portion of the population has a great passion for it. Artists and Writers create something for others to enjoy. Engineers fix and build many things, similar to artists and writers with how they create paintings and […]
The tire represents a circle The shadow of the fence represents perpendicular lines The roof is an obtuse The bike rack has an acute angle The desk is a square The fence has a right angle The base of the pole is a cylinder The railing outside the portable door has parallel lines Group members: Reman, […]
The Automatic Water Cup filler 5000 When you drop a small ball down an incline plane (A), the ball swoops up from a ramp onto a platform (B) and falls into a plastic cup with a hole at the bottom (C), shooting down pushing a pendulum (D) to move forward, knocking down 8 dominos (E). The eighth domino lands […]
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When I started my self portrait I decided to start with the head then move onto the eyes, mouth and eyebrows. Once I created my left eyebrow I found it difficult to replicate it and make my right eyebrow. To over come my challenges, I had a lot of trial and error. When I […]