For this synthesis essay I did well with integrating quotes into my sentences, however, some of the quotes did not help reinforce my argument, therefore, I wish to improve my selection of quotes in order to strengthen my argument throughout my essay.
High Fidelity – Expository Essay In this essay, I did well with organizing the paragraphs according to my thesis statement, however, I want improve my thesis by having it clearly answer the essay question.
Angie Johnston Essay A few things I think I did well in my essay was my use of vocabulary words I added, as well I think my essay was well organized. Nonetheless, I want to improve on making my thesis statement clear to understand, as well, making sure my citations are done correctly.
My Family Traditions HB
In my narrative essay think I did well using rhetorical devices and showing rather than telling the story, however, I think I can improve my use of colons and semi-colons as well as my word choice.