My Family Traditions HB
In my narrative essay think I did well using rhetorical devices and showing rather than telling the story, however, I think I can improve my use of colons and semi-colons as well as my word choice.
I chose the words Teach, Writing and Solved. I chose these words because these three words were all part of the process to be successful with solving the Rubiks Cube. My brother used a lot of his patients to teach me to solve a Rubiks cube. Through his teaching, we bonded and became a lot […]
Human Behaviors quote The quote I chose I find inspirational because it has a powerful message on not giving up. I decided to match this quote with a photo of my friends and I because whenever one of us is feeling down, we are able to lift each other up again. This quote is a […]
English Synthesis Essay Two things I am proud of about my essay is the way I worded my thesis statement and how I referenced quotes and reflected on them. Two things I can improve from my essay would be adding comas more often when they are needed and my word choice in some sentences.
In English 11 I learned many tools on how to properly construct a sentence, including the uses of thamos, colons and semi-colons. I also learned about the rule of three as well as how to properly reference an outside source and when to add quotes. During this class I really enjoyed watching Homecoming King and […]
My groups problem was that youths are not respected for their political ideas. My group and I decide to talk about our ideas of how we wanted to portray our design. We all contributed different ideas and where able to elaborate on each others creative thinking. We decided to design an area for students to […]
Redskins… Respectful or Racist? Stereotypes have become common in today’s world. People make assumptions based on their physical appearance which then causes people to think less of themselves and other. When most people think of First Nations, the thought of feathers and war paint come to mind. Although these things have been a part of […]
Do you think Joseph Boyden should write stories about the Indigenous people of Canada? Why or why not? I think Joseph Boyden should write stories about the Indigenous people of Canada. Joseph Boyden has written many books about the Indigenous people and has done it in a respectful manner. Even though it is proven that […]
Narritive essay final In my essay I think I had a good lesson learned but I should have mentioned how I learned my lesson more throughout the story. As well I think my essay had a good variety of sentences however I need to improve showing rather than telling in my writing.