Category: Grade 12
Synthesis Essay Corrections
For this synthesis essay I did well with integrating quotes into my sentences, however, some of the quotes did not help reinforce my argument, therefore, I wish to improve my selection of quotes in order to strengthen my argument throughout my essay.
Essay Corrections
High Fidelity – Expository Essay In this essay, I did well with organizing the paragraphs according to my thesis statement, however, I want improve my thesis by having it clearly answer the essay question.
Expository Essay Corrections
Angie Johnston Essay A few things I think I did well in my essay was my use of vocabulary words I added, as well I think my essay was well organized. Nonetheless, I want to improve on making my thesis statement clear to understand, as well, making sure my citations are done correctly.
Narrative Essay Corrections
In my narrative essay think I did well using rhetorical devices and showing rather than telling the story, however, I think I can improve my use of colons and semi-colons as well as my word choice.
Fractured Poetry BkC
I chose the words Teach, Writing and Solved. I chose these words because these three words were all part of the process to be successful with solving the Rubiks Cube. My brother used a lot of his patients to teach me to solve a Rubiks cube. Through his teaching, we bonded and became a lot […]
