I believe that I maintained a humorous, witty dialogue consistently throughout my essay. In a sense, the process of writing said dialogue allowed me to mold a former bad memory into a funny one.
I believe that I went into great detail about the events that occurred during this day. This made for a satisfying consistency, a nice “flow,” over the course of my essay.
I am certain that I need to work on my punctuation. I found recurrent errors concerning my use of semi-colons.
I am certain that I need to work on proper capitalization. I found recurrent errors concerning quotes. I can work on this by slowing down and thoroughly thinking through my dialogue.
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Great comic 🙂 I like your first point the best 🙂