Synthesis Essay 1 Corrections

Two things I am proud of in this essay would be my transitions and evidence. I think I showed effective evidence to back up my claims in this essay, which was aided in my transitions and made my essay’s readability excellent. Two things I think I could work on would be my “so what” and further deepening my analysis during some parts. I think I could’ve provided a stronger “so what” as to provide meaning to my essay, and if I deepened my analysis, I think I could’ve offered an even stronger argument.

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