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I was most proud of the fact that I was able to write an essay that met the requirements, was very descriptive and I was able to keep it well organized and put down all my thoughts neatly. I need to improve on developing my conflict so it is more clear to the reader as well as remembering to write out numbers in written format instead of just putting the number (ex: one instead of 1).
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2. Sentence: This picture was taken this past summer in Waterton Lakes National Park, Alberta.
Phrase: The people in the picture are my siblings and cousins,
Words: memories, picture, family
Reflection: I decided to choose the 3 words listed above because they describe what I wrote about and they create an image in your mind about what it could be about before even reading the story. This helps me know what words stand out and would be good to use in my poem as keywords to make it more powerful. After doing this excersise I realized that using strong words and the way you punctuate, organize, and space your words can really change the meaning behind what you are trying to say.
3. Poem
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the picture was taken
family standing all around
memories that will last forever
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