Thank you for posting your introductory response explaining ‘New Media,’ fragmented usage of media, and suggestions on maintaining healthy digital habits. The following are observations I have made regarding your post, based on our most recent lesson:
– Spelling (its interactive because > it is), incorrect it’s
– You have a quotation included, but it contains an error (No first name of author in parenthesis).
– Great use of Formal Writing (3rd person pronouns, avoids contractions, avoids abbreviations, elevated language)
Thank you for posting your introductory response explaining ‘New Media,’ fragmented usage of media, and suggestions on maintaining healthy digital habits. The following are observations I have made regarding your post, based on our most recent lesson:
– Spelling (its interactive because > it is), incorrect it’s
– You have a quotation included, but it contains an error (No first name of author in parenthesis).
– Great use of Formal Writing (3rd person pronouns, avoids contractions, avoids abbreviations, elevated language)
Thank you,
Mr. Barazzuol
English Teacher