1 thing I am proud of is that I put a lot of time in this essay even though I didn’t get the mark I was hoping for, I am still proud. 2 things I need to improve for grade 12, is my use of absolutes. I put a lot of absolutes in my essay and it bump my marked down. Also, I just need to improve writing essays in general, I’ve made a lot of mistakes and errors writing this.
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