Essay Correction

  I did well on using my time in class wisely and asked a lot of questions. I did well quoting quotes and citing them.   I wish to improve my introduction of quotes. I wish to improve my use of transition words and make my essay more formal in general.

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Fame Spoken word

Good things: I feel like my voice was really clear and easy to hear. My eye contact as well, might need a bit more but I feel like I had more eye contact than last years. Bad things: I was really fast, I always catch myself talking really fast because I’m nervous. I feel like…

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The Breakup Narrative Essay

I’m proud of my use of dialogue tags (cried, murmured, whispered, said, etc..) I’m proud of how my story started. It started off in the middle of the action, I really aimed for readers to be curious to what is going on in the beginning of the story. I can improve my grammar definitely, I…

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Short Story Reflection and Video

This is a story of how Jesse is faced with tough challenges, he’s a good student and an athlete. But will he make the basketball tryouts though? While filming this video we really had to film everywhere, at school, gym, friends house and outside. I feel like filming these scenes with a different setting each…

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Where I’m From

I Am From Poem I am from a shoe From Nike and Adidas I am from the Philippines, dirty, beautiful, and full of joy I am from a rose, bright red pink I’m from expensive and strictness From Precy and Sally I’m from the small town and trapped From Santa and Tooth-fairy I’m from the…

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