- I’m proud of my use of dialogue tags (cried, murmured, whispered, said, etc..)
- I’m proud of how my story started. It started off in the middle of the action, I really aimed for readers to be curious to what is going on in the beginning of the story.
- I can improve my grammar definitely, I feel like it chipped off my marks.
- I can improve my use of words. I know I can use more complex words but I struggle to find where to put them.
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