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Reflection:
What I did well :
- I believe the introduction to each paragraph and comparisons to other real-life situations were very well done.
- The way the arguments were tied into over-arching similar themes (History, music, and freedom of speech).
Improvements needed:
- There were many informal words used and ideas that could have been phrased differently.
- I could have expanded on more examples of my arguments rather than saying the same things different ways.