Two of the things that I am proud of in this essay would be my thesis statement and my ability to talk about the topics of structure and tone in the same paragraph without writing too much. I normally find it difficult to get the essay started and to create my thesis statement, but for this essay, I was able to write a thesis statement that I was proud of. Sometimes I find that I write too much about a topic, and add things that are not important, but with this essay, I was able to write about two topics in a paragraph without writing too much. Two of the things that I want to do better for the next essay are the “So What?” at the end of my conclusion, and to use fewer words that I do not need in my writing. In my essays, I tend to struggle to extend beyond and write a good “So What?” at the end of my conclusion, but I hope to be able to improve that in the next essay. I also tend to add extra words that are not needed in my essays, but I will try to take out the extra words that I do not need in my next essay.

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