2 things I’m proud of… using a source we didn’t go over in class having a creative title 2 things to improve… revisions sentence combining
Category: Grade 11
Design Thinking
The issue we wanted to fix was the mistreatment of new immigrants coming to Canada or North America and how society needs to be more accepting of them since they risked so much to come here. The design we made in order to fix this was a public announcement on Parliament Hill in Ottawa with our Prime Minister to address the issue…
Growing Up Through My Eyes
Two Stars: Chose a meaningful topic Add depth to the story Two Wishes: Add more detail in areas Integrating new voices
How Disobeying Unjust Laws Has Enforced Change
Two things I did well: Finding quotes and information to back up my argument and help give depth to my essay Talk about how this affects change being made in 2019 and how peoples lives have been improved due to it (social issues) Two things I want to improve on: Going into more detail and expanding my thoughts Integrating…