Reflections:
During the process of writing my narrative essay, I think I did well on showing instead of telling. In my opinion, I did a good job of describing my situation in a vivid way. Another thing I think I improved on was the structure of my writing. I liked how I was able to make everything flow while I was reading. Two things I can work on, is correctly using dialogue format. I’m still unfamiliar with it. I could review it by reading more examples. Sometimes I like using awkward words. Sometimes I include many awkward words on my writings. Therefore,I could improve on my word choice and making the purpose stand out clearly.
Narrative Essay:
http://myriverside.sd43.bc.ca/yifanj2015/files/2018/04/Heros-Journey-Narrative-Essay-256yn7m.doc
