Bike Rides with My Lying Brother? Corrections

Bike Rides with My Lying Brother?

I think i used imagery and showed the story instead of telling and i like i used figurative language properly.

I could have used more punctuation and shortened my paragraphs.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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