I think the way I used imagery and voice was really good. I think I showed my story and didn’t tell it, I think i also used my own voice to show my thoughts and my opinions on certain things. I think I could work on my use of dialogue, punctuation and my vocabulary. I need to work on the punctuation and spacing for using dialogue and I think my vocabulary could have been enhanced further.

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