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Open in new tab Two Things I Did Well:
I feel like my essay was well written and was had good information. I also think I did well in providing evidence of my argument.
Two Things I Want to Improve:
I made a few dumb mistakes when writing this like formatting my quotes wrong and having contractions like “isn’t”. I would also like to improve my vocabulary to make it more interesting next time instead of having a lot of repetition and deadwood words.