Synthesis Essay – Breaking News: Breaking People – Corrections

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Improvements

  1. Having the quotes more integrated with the context of the sentences around it (Not bombing)
  2. Making sure sentences make sense by reading them over and over again.

Proud

  1. Using many quotes that supported my arguments
  2. Comparing the two sources in numerous ways.

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