What I did well:

One thing that I think I did well in doing was explaining the multiple events and things that happened in my story, but did not drag the plot out and extend the writing too much. The multiple points in the story that made it make sense where concise and well explained.

What I could have done better:

I think I could have showed the story more rather than telling it. After ready it a couple times over after handing it in I realized it was a bit bland and could have used more language to show the reader the plot and points of the story rather than making it less interesting and monotone.