There’s a bird that lost in the sky
Hover in the fog, and flying with no navigation
Birds are passing and just fly
Twittering with no intention
The surly sullen bell is ringing on the hill
Surrounds are the darken mountains
When the twitters start to shrill
They will never get to the fountain
and when he dark is shaven
There’s a bleam of sunlight through the clouds
When you get to the haven
It won’t be any dark shrouds
Don’t stop the step to the dream
And you will chase up to the bleam
Eva: None: Someone lost, begin to clearing’: Curios: Birds tweeting: “birds tweeting: Third Quatrain: Birds tweeting:
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The loss and trying to chase the dream. It made me feel dark and sad but it cleared up. It made me think of the sun appearing behind the clouds. loss, sullen.I pictured that there is still hope. It’s clearing up from the loss and there is a new way for a beginning 3rd quatrain. “Don’t stop the step to the dream was my favourite because it still gives you hope that something good will happen.
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This song is about and the author tries to convey that Someone is lost then beginning to carry on.
This sonnet makes me feel sad because the words, never, don’t stop chasing it, and dark sky.
It makes me think of birds flying in storms the phrase, Dark sky birds tweeting.
The third quatrain the sky clears
My favourite line is ‘Dark sky birds tweeting’.