I like the words you used, minimal spelling errors but overall it was great!
I really like the characters you chose for this novel. especially the expressions they make cause it helps me understand more of the story
I like the images how you show different emotions in each panel. I like how they make you laugh. I liked the words how they stand out. The graffiti words look cool how they are popping out of the picture. The text boxes I thought were pretty cool as well. I like how you had nice backgrounds in the back of each picture. Your words are funny in the story.
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