Thank you for posting your introductory response explaining ‘New Media,’ fragmented usage of media, and suggestions on maintaining healthy digital habits. The following are observations I have made regarding your post, based on our most recent lesson:
– MLA format needs to be addressed (paragraph should be double spaced, and paragraph should be indented)
– You have a quotation included, but it contains several errors (missing year after author, should have spaces before the quotation marks and the parenthesis).
– Avoid second person pronouns (you)
Thank you for posting your introductory response explaining ‘New Media,’ fragmented usage of media, and suggestions on maintaining healthy digital habits. The following are observations I have made regarding your post, based on our most recent lesson:
– MLA format needs to be addressed (paragraph should be double spaced, and paragraph should be indented)
– You have a quotation included, but it contains several errors (missing year after author, should have spaces before the quotation marks and the parenthesis).
– Avoid second person pronouns (you)
Thank you,
Mr. Barazzuol
English Teacher