Thank you for posting your flip book, showing your understanding of the short story, “The Veldt,” written by Ray Bradbury. Here are my observations regarding your work:
– Great job transferring methods of presentation (PPT > PDF > Flip Book > Embedded blog post)
– Book has a combination of both text and photos
– Layout looks somewhat professional with balanced photos, colour schemes, matching fonts, etc.
– Some pages look a little bare, could have been enhanced in presentation
– Not sure if all the deeper level questions are on point with the story
Overall, I thought you did a good job on this project!
Thank you for posting your flip book, showing your understanding of the short story, “The Veldt,” written by Ray Bradbury. Here are my observations regarding your work:
– Great job transferring methods of presentation (PPT > PDF > Flip Book > Embedded blog post)
– Book has a combination of both text and photos
– Layout looks somewhat professional with balanced photos, colour schemes, matching fonts, etc.
– Some pages look a little bare, could have been enhanced in presentation
– Not sure if all the deeper level questions are on point with the story
Overall, I thought you did a good job on this project!
Thank you,
Mr. Barazzuol
COL Teacher
bbarazzuol@sd43.bc.ca