Effects of Discrimination at How One Appear to Others in “The Dollshouse” and “What Do You Remember of the Evacuation”

Effects of Discrimination at How One Appear to Others in-16wd3o0

Two Things I Did Well:

I integrated quotes properly and supports my argument

I used incorporated transition words to have some kind of flow to it

Two Things I Will Practice:

Try to avoid awkward and run on sentences

Always proof read to catch any grammar and punctuation errors