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For the description, you can give a bit more of a background to what led up to the situation at Fort Necessity.
For the significance, explain what effect the events surrounding Fort Necessity had on North America.
With the perspective, especially knowing how things really turned out, you can see that it might be over-exaggerated at it makes the British look proud and powerful, ready to fight. But remember that this was a bit of a disaster for George Washington.
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This looks better.
For the description, you can give a bit more of a background to what led up to the situation at Fort Necessity.
For the significance, explain what effect the events surrounding Fort Necessity had on North America.
With the perspective, especially knowing how things really turned out, you can see that it might be over-exaggerated at it makes the British look proud and powerful, ready to fight. But remember that this was a bit of a disaster for George Washington.
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