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Open in new tab Two things that I am proud of about my essay are both my ability to create a good thesis statement that is very descriptive, and allows the reader to understand the argument in great detail. The other thing I was proud of for this essay would be my ability to compare and contrast the two authors, and my ability to show even though they are drastically different people, they can relate in a number of ways.
Two things that I believe I could work on for next time would be my choice of quotes and working to show how they impact the argument I intend to make. Another thing I believe I could do better would be my overall punctuation and grammar, helping to make the essay flow a little bit better and enhance my argument.
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