- Written in 1937 (two years beofre the depression ended)
- Salinas, California (urban area, 4,000 people)
- Worldwide Economic depression that began in the 1930s, that began in the US.
I think my writing for this poem was very good, I enjoyed the imagery I created. I also liked the way my writing flowed. I think I could have improved my memorization, as well as creating more movement throughout my presentation. But, I think my spoken word was overall very good, and I enjoyed it!
Block A English Honours 10 Olivia H – Narrative Essay Corrections –rro7kt
I am very proud of my essay. I like the imagery that I created in the story, and the voice and dialogue that I wrote. I think that I could improve the organization and grammar (use of colons) in my writing. Overall I am very happy with the story that I wrote.