One thing I am proud of regarding my work in grade 11:
I am proud that I improved the detail and depth of my work. Last year I would sometimes skim over things and not really go in depth, which would have been helpful at points. It not only impacted the way I did my assignments but also impeded on my grade in various instances. This year I really tried to put every single piece of detail I could into my work.
Two things I can work on for grade 12:
I wish to be more cautious about ‘human mistakes’ or to be more cautious in general because as shown, on my good copy of my essay, I didn’t even have a title. This goes for simple punctuation and grammar as well.
Secondly, I wish to be able to write more formally. I found that I almost always write in a slang/figurative format which is a complete counterpart for a synthesis essay. This would also help me for things other than just the essay, such as writing emails to teachers/boss.
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