Two things I did well on in this essay were my quotes and the formatting. The quotes supported my arguments well and the formatting made it easier to follow along with my topic. Two things I need to improve on are getting to the point sooner in the paragraph and editing out unnecessary words from the final draft. Compare and Contrast Essay-To Kill a Mockingbird and Of Mice and…
I think that Langston Hughes was the best at creating allusions in his poem. One of the reasons why I think that is because his allusions made sense to everyone right away. Also, all of the allusions tied into the poem really well and added a lot of effect to the theme. When he says, “I looked upon the Nile and raised the pyramids above it” (Hughes #6) it’s a…
Throughout the novella Of Mice and Men, John Steinbeck frequently demonstrates how does one cope during hardship? George and Lennie’s friendship helps them stay positive through all of their difficulties such as being migrant workers with no guaranteed job. Having friendship during hard times can help to motivate people who are in tough conditions: “They don’t belong no place… With us it ain’t like that. We got a future. We…
Princess Revised-1-2bcmezs Two things that I think I did well with in this essay was getting the theme across as well as creating good emotion. Two things I would like to improve on next time are sentence fluency and showing the story instead of telling.
In the video The Human Condition, the man talks about how he lost his leg. He tells us about the resilience it takes to deal with something like that and how it’s hard to recover but you can do it. He says that he now works in a lab with a psychologist where they work with people who have recently lost someone or something important to them to see if there…
