She’s Finally Here!
2 things I did well: It is was easy to read and organized. It was also a good and thoughtful story. 2 things I need to work on: not repeating myself too much and using more concise and advanced language/vocab.
My Riverside Rapid Digital Portfolio
2 things I did well: It is was easy to read and organized. It was also a good and thoughtful story. 2 things I need to work on: not repeating myself too much and using more concise and advanced language/vocab.