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Open in new tab 2 things I’m proud of: I also find it hard to come up with a hook, so I am really proud of how well this one turned out. I am also proud very proud of the words I used to describe things. I really tried to add more complex and insightful word and I am very proud of how it turned out.
2 things to improve: I could have added more background information or gone further in depth about some of my points. I also could have brought present day examples of this to further prove my argument.
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